dare2dreamer
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Posted: April 19 2006,18:04 |
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Very nicely done.
The only thing I might suggest is re-writing the introduction to remove specific references to the Microsoft Windows operating system. It may be strictly my pet peeve, but I've always preferred more generic references to "common proprietary operating systems" in my F/OSS documentation.
It likely stems from my lack of love for the closed-source alternatives, and my specific desire to not provide them with additional mindshare and advertising on what amounts to "my home turf"
I like that DSL seems to treat Microsoft Windows users as welcomed refugees within the community, but I think documentation is a place where we should definitely keep our agendas unmuddied. Ultimately, DSL exists (like Debian and all of its spawn/progeny) to provide a great operating system, and most definitely not just a great operating system for people who hate Microsoft's offerings.
Just a thought
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