DmSmLxRep
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Posted: April 13 2008,03:20 |
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Page 130, "Before the script proceeds, it needs to know if you are installing DSL for the first time or are upgrading. The dialog is shown in Figure 6-8."
With the exception of the reference to Figure 6-8, isn't this what the previous paragraph stated? Perhaps the Figure reference could be incorporated into the previous paragraph and the remaining sentence, "Before ... upgrading." eliminated?
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