Joined: April 2006
||Posted: April 13 2008,03:58
|Quote (DmSmLxRep @ April 12 2008,23:20)|
|Page 130, "Before the script proceeds, it needs to know if you are installing DSL for the first time or are upgrading. The dialog is shown in Figure 6-8."|
With the exception of the reference to Figure 6-8, isn't this what the previous paragraph stated? Perhaps the Figure reference could be incorporated into the previous paragraph and the remaining sentence, "Before ... upgrading." eliminated?
Well, I had to open my book to check this out. It's true, and then repeated yet a third time as the figure description ("you are asked if you want to upgrade or install"). Funny though, many readers will next proceed to install vs upgrade, and then complain on the board that there was no other option after their drive was reformatted.
I hope you're available before the next version. I'm horrible at editing.